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The Superman Family! => Supergirl => Topic started by: Supergrl5013 on September 11, 2005, 05:10:53 AM



Title: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a ch
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 11, 2005, 05:10:53 AM
i have two: one related to the topic of 9/11/2001...and why sg couldn't help..if you guys are traumatized till this day because of 9/11 then..i'd rather suggest you'll not read it... I think both are rated PG or PG 13..because of the beginning... it's a touching story plus i really like the way i wrote it.....it's sad in the middle  and one from a nifty dream i had a few weeks ago....some thing about Superman get captured by  Lex while Supergirl's at a performance...something like the Grammy's...i think that's it...yeah...that's the one :D....i'll post both when i get a chance some time this week..when i do...it'll probably take a while 'cause it's on, like,4 sheets of paper back-to-back and i'm a slow typer..but i'm getting better at it b/c of my info tech classes...:D..so when i finish  them i'll post 'em!


Title: Typed now..Yippee!
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 13, 2005, 10:16:57 AM
Disclaimer: Supergirl and related characters are copyrighted by DC comics..there fore i do not own them...If you guys are having aftershocks of 9/11...then you'd better not read this...it'll probably bring up bad memories of that day....I have the first one typed here ya go:

It was around 8:45 when Linda was in the waiting room at her college watching the news. “This just in …Flight 11 has crashed into the World Trade Center” said a reporter with montages of people screaming and fleeing from the WTC with soot all over them.  Linda’s cup slipped from her hand and crashed on to the floor, while she stood there horrified and silent. “Oh my God” was the only word she could whisper with her hands over her mouth while she sunk into a chair and thought “what should I do… I have to do something…I have to call Clark.”.  After Ten hours of watching the towers collapse over and over again on the news, she went to the payphone to call Clark. “Hello. Clark it’s me Mae…I don’t know what to do right now…I’m….I’m speechless. Clark? What should I do?” “We can’t do a thing right now Mae”, said Clark in a gruff voice. “I want to help them …but I feel powerless right now”, said Linda.”I know …I do too”, said Clark in a somber mood. “Can’t I just fly there, I mean, to New York?...it’ll take me only a few minutes” “If you want to. I’m in Metropolis right now…I’m going to take a day off flying…” “KENT! GET YOU BUTT OVER here and get me more new on this report on this plane crash that’s in Pennsylvania” said Perry White….”Just….Just a minute chief I have to talk to my cousin in Chicago” “ FINE…you have 5 minutes, if you’re not here then you’re  going to be retiring early” said Perry White.  “Ok…ok chief…look Mae I’ve got to go …by the way…don’t get this to your head.” A moment later Supergirl floated into into Ground Zero. Searched for al few people then sat down in the rubble and cried “This could’ve been prevented by me and I didn’t have a chance to save them.” She wept while a worker came to her, put his hand softly on her shoulder and said “ This isn’t your fault…what happened…happened …There’s nothing you can do about it” “You’re right” she took his hand “Thanks…” she said while looking for survivors in the rubble . “Help me…someone help me” said a little voice. “Don’t worry I’ll get you out of there” it took her 20 seconds to get the little limp body out of the rubble. “Thanks Supergirl…my mom and Dad worked here in the building…Can you help me find them?” “Sure…What do they look like?” He described them and they searched for hours before a woman in a business  uniform covered in  soot and bleeding from a gash on her hand which was wrapped up, came running. “Johnny? Johnny! Oh, Thank god I’ve found you! I thought you were gone!”, she said. “Johnny?” Supergirl said with a raised eyebrow and a smirk “So that’s your name?” “Yep" said the 10-year old smiling “Hey, Mom? Where’s Dad?”. “Oh Honey…I don’t know how to say this but…he’s gone” “Gone?...What do you mean Gone?!”. “She means he’s… dead” Said Supergirl trying to get it out of her. “Dead?..Dead?!....oh, no This can’t be happening” “ I’m so sorry Johnny…I’m so very sorry that I didn’t come before…before this happened “ She frowned and started to fly away, but he put his hand on her and said “ Supergirl don’’t leave…if it wasn’t for you I wouldn’t be here standing right next to you and I wouldn’t have survived all that” Thanks  Johnny…I’ll remember that (pause) do you want’ a souvenir or something from me?” “Okay” said Johnny. She went to a piece of really bent metal from the WTC, straightened it out, and made a pentagon. She took another piece of Steel and made and “S” and welded it on with her Flame vision. ”Here you go.”  She said while the boy was jumping up and down with delight. “I’ve got to go… (Pause) What’s your full name?”  “Jonathan .Jonathan Matthews” he said. “Well Jonathan Matthews. You’re my hero.” With that said she took off to Chicago with a hero on her mind


Title: :(
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 13, 2005, 10:17:09 AM
...no one's replying yet...someone please reply...:(


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: MatterEaterLad on September 13, 2005, 12:54:14 PM
I think its pretty good...maybe most members are more into talking about specific issues, writers, and changes in the comics over the years, so, maybe?


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 15, 2005, 10:25:07 AM
i'll type the other one next week...have a great week-end..even though it's a thursday! :D besides i might spend the day in Ny with my mom 'cause in the night she's goin' to isreal...Good luck to her..hope sh'e gettin me something :D


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: MatterEaterLad on September 15, 2005, 08:40:25 PM
Well, very cool, keep up with your fan fic even if folks here go in a different direction...

No problems! :D


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: Super Monkey on September 15, 2005, 09:39:28 PM
Keep posting them!

Have fun and enjoy yourself, that is what this site is all about :)

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Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: Dylan Clearbrook on September 16, 2005, 07:00:36 AM
Indeed.   Do continue writing.

I don't check these forums nearly enough  :oops:

While I usually don't care for fan-fiction dealing with the PAD Supergirl (aka Linda Danvers), I found this one touching...perhaps because of the subject matter.  The same thing that moved me to create that supergirl 9/11 wallpaper in the gallery.

Anyway, do keep it up :)  With DarkMark all but retiring and me all but retiring from writing Fan-fiction, we need the new blood :)  (Hear that DTO?  Hmmmm?   Nudge nudge) :lol:

Dylan


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 16, 2005, 07:47:29 AM
Quote from: "Dylan Clearbrook"
Indeed.   Do continue writing.

I don't check these forums nearly enough  :oops:

While I usually don't care for fan-fiction dealing with the PAD Supergirl (aka Linda Danvers), I found this one touching...perhaps because of the subject matter.  The same thing that moved me to create that supergirl 9/11 wallpaper in the gallery.

Anyway, do keep it up :)  With DarkMark all but retiring and me all but retiring from writing Fan-fiction, we need the new blood :)  (Hear that DTO?  Hmmmm?   Nudge nudge) :lol:

Dylan
What's DTO...do you mean Devoted to Smallville?...might be a possibility..i'm trying to get my songs on to Bluetights.net/theplanet...i'm Supergrl on there...so please drop by...give me a line...or something to that extent :P


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: dto on September 16, 2005, 11:39:34 AM
Supergrl5013 wrote:

What's DTO...do you mean Devoted to Smallville?

----------------------------------------------

Hello, did somebody page me?   :)

"Devoted to Smallville"?  Wouldn't that be "DTS"?  

Then again, that's WAY better than "Devoted to Otisburg".   :wink:

Actually, I haven't seen an episode of "Smallville", or most of the previous Superman television series -- too busy!

And I'm STILL struggling with my own fan-fiction, which Dylan and others at the Continuum Worlds are impatiently waiting for.  

Pleased to meet you, Supergrl5013, and welcome to this forum.  I look forward to seeing more of your work.


Title: :D
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 16, 2005, 12:10:13 PM
thanks ..:D


Title: Update
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 17, 2005, 11:53:34 PM
i'm trying to add a...**BIG Spoiler** fight scene with Supergirl fighting some goons that Lex sent at the show**BIG Spoiler**...i got it covered...just adding for an update


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: darkmark90 on September 22, 2005, 02:18:53 AM
Quote from: "Dylan Clearbrook"
Indeed.   Do continue writing.
Anyway, do keep it up :)  With DarkMark all but retiring and me all but retiring from writing Fan-fiction, we need the new blood :)  (Hear that DTO?  Hmmmm?   Nudge nudge) :lol:

Dylan


I ain't retiring yet.  Still got a Kara descendant I'm writing in The Great Confrontation, still have a story of Earth-1.5 Kara I'm doing (Kal & Lyla), and I still have the last of the Hellsister Trilogy to do.  If I'm taking too long, all apologies, but there's only so much I can do.

DM


Title: Still untitled story...but a new one
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 22, 2005, 10:28:26 AM
New story

Untitled story

Supergirl floated above hundreds of people with flashing cameras, yelling for her to come down and strike a pose. She didn’t, instead she Super-speeded down and held the door for a few people to come in. When they were all seated, She went up into the rafters and watched the Grammy’s, waiting in interest for her turn to go on stage and show the audience what she can do. After that she planned to have Superman drop by in the middle of the performance…. She listened very closely to the announcer then on the other side of the room she heard someone gasping for air …then choking. She super-speeded right next to her and said “Are you al right, Ma’am?” No response “Are you chocking?” she asked. The woman clasped her hands around her throat and nodded. “It’s going to be al right”. She asked the audience if there was a paramedic in the building…A young man in his thirties stood up and rushed to her side. “Make sure she’s okay after the show”. “Okay” he said and started to do the Heimlich, “it’s not budging.” He said. “Let me try…Mrs.…this’ll probably hurt a little bit…Well okay…Correction: Maybe a lot…so don’t worry” She said during the commercials. She did a Heimlich and the chips came shooting out. “Please bring her some water, she said to the paramedic. “ Are you ok?” she asked the woman. “Yes thank you” she said while drinking some water. “On with the Show!” Supergirl exclaimed. “As you all know, I’m invulnerable, so to prove it a few SWAT officers are going to come out and shoot at me” “You Ready?!”  “Yeah”, said the crowd. All of a sudden some ropes came swinging down from the rafters and some guys in all black outfits came onto the stage carrying guns and pointing them at Supergirl. “Wait a minute; you’re not the SWAT Team” Said Supergirl with a surprised look on her face. In the background Lex Luthor’s face appeared on the screen and said “You’re right Supergirl, They’re not the SWAT Team…but they’re more lethal”, he laughed. “LUTHOR!!”, she yelled with her eyes blazing. “What are you doing?!...Where’s Superman?” “Superman…Superman… Oh…Your cousin…He’s with me in a kryptonite cell. Well… Superman? Any Last words?”. “Yes... Kara…Save me! he said .The camera pans to Lex saying “Kara….interesting…Is that your Kryptonian name?”.” Yes….Don’t worry Kal, I’ll get you.”Hey Sweetheart, I think you forgot about us,” said  a thug pointing at his gun while signaling others to aim at her. “ You do know that I’m invulnerable…Right?”, she said with a smirk. “Yes, but, me and my boys want to find out by ourselves…ATTACK!”, said the thug.. “Okay.. but I’m warning you…you wouldn’t like me when I’m angry “. A thug punches her in the stomach few times but she doesn’t wince.. “Okay…Now I’m angry” she says while flipping the guy over and throwing him at a bunch of black-suited thugs to her right, they go flying through a wall onto the street outside. “Anybody Else?”, she said. A big group of guys came rushing up to her and huddles around her trying to attack her “ So you want to play rough…huh?...well…OK”, and she blasts them with a Psychokineses blast, Which sends a bunch of them flying in every direction using her PK she holds them in place over the audience… “ Want to see a new trick?” she says and throws them out the same big hole through the wall. Her cape bursts into flames while two guys start rushing toward her, they burst into flames. “Need help cooling off?” she asked. She uses her Super-breath to cool them down then uses her PK to throw them out of the big new hole in the wall. “Ready, Set, Aim ,FIRE” Said an officer. Supergirl yawns while bullets are harmlessly bouncing off of her “Ohh.. that tickles” She uses her flame vision to melt the guns…and does a right hook to the first twenty people to her right which sends them flying out of the same big two holes in the wall. She shunts herself to the last twenty people and says “BOO!” with her eyes flaring…The guys scream and start running while Supergirl super-speed right in front of them saying “You’re leaving just when the party’s just started..?” She uses her TK to hold them down and counter blocks every other move they have. After that she just knocks them unconscious and leaves to save Superman.
Within minutes she’s at the Lexcorp Building staring at the window and teleports in. “Why Supergirl…what a pleasant surprise.” “Enough chit-chat Lex. Where’s Kal-El?”  she says with demanding eyes. “Don’t fret my dear. You’ll get to him after you beat my guards…GET HER!” Lex yells and a force of 20 guards come barreling through. While Supergirl counter attacks and lights them on fire..Literally then she uses her TK to stop a barrage of bullets and drops them down on the floor. Lex is upstairs in the Kryptonite Cell having a chat with Superman. “It’s been 6 years. Now I’ve finally defeated you. …I’m President…and with your friend fighting my guards. You won’t have any time to recover. Then I’ll watch you wither away and die”    Then he laughs maniacally. With all the guards down and out Supergirl looks for Kal-El with her X-ray vision, peering through the walls and ceiling. She finds him crouching almost to the ground in pain. She Super-speeds to up stairs finds a really heavy steel door outside the Cell and rips it open and demands that Lex should return or Else. “Or else what? My pretty little firecracker you’ll rip me in two?” “If not …then worse,” she says “I can hurt you more than you’ll ever know …”*
“Really? Let’s find out shall we.” Says Lex. Supergirl uses her PK and pins him to the wall while super speeding towards the Kryptonite cell. Tearing the steel Kryptonite bars and flies out the window with Superman. “Kal-El …Are you ok?” “Do I look ok to you?” “ umm…no” “(pause) Thanks for saving me” “ No problem…I’m going to take you to the Fortress of Solitude so you can recharge…Then I’ll get back to the show”

*" this is a paraphrase of a quote in Supergirl: Many Happy Returns , when Kara is confronting Rebel, right after Linda slugged her and took her place in the rocket.

Her exact words were "...I will Hurt you. I'll hurt you worse than you've ever been hurt in yoiur whole life. I can carve you upw as soon as look at you. I can break you, boil you, freeze you. I can do things you can't imagine. things I can't imagine until I have to...and then I'll improvise."


Now the book has the remaining words which were changed in the Wallpaper "Part of me is hoping you will attack. And part of my is praying...for your sake, and my own peace of mind...that you don't. It's up to you."
- from Dylan


Title: Re: i have two stories...but i'll type them up when i have a
Post by: Supergrl5013 on September 22, 2005, 07:52:29 PM
Quote from: "Super Monkey"
Keep posting them!

Have fun and enjoy yourself, that is what this site is all about :)

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aww...i love your pic. it's so cute...i love anime stuff like that :D...did you make that your self?


Title: chapter 3's on the way
Post by: Supergrl5013 on October 15, 2005, 04:20:13 PM
Chapter 3 is on the way...Spoiler i'm trying to add the Fortress of Solitude...but the version that's in the Superman/Batman comics...all shiny floors and stuff....there are going to be three new additions to the FOS ,an ID scanner/fingerprint/eye scanner, a Recharge Room, plus aroom for all the awesome aliens Supes has collected over the years!