I've gotten really great comments, for the song softspoken, i wrote on another site.here's all three of them The first one is called Softspoken and yes it's about my family problems over the summer
this is the Final edit for softspoken...hopefully
Softspoken
Chorus/Verse 1
I try to speak, i know that it's ubsurd, because i know that i can't be heard. ' cause i'm so softspoken, yes i'm so softspoken.
Verse 2
Everytime you argue with mom, i try not to cry or i go downstairs and turn away. Your heart's cold and clenched while mine is fragile and drenched. My soul is my fire my only desire is that it shouldn't be broken 'cause i'm so softspoken, yes i'm so softspoken
Verse 3
Everytime i say a word, you shout and say that's ubsurd but i know that it isn't. I can't help that my soul is bleeding and that i'm needing a father
Verse 4
One day i talked to you on the phone you said that you were alone but really you weren't. I tried talking to you but you wont listen. My heart said that you won't be missin' me. Because i'm so softspoken, yes i'm so softspoken
Verse 5
You said to mom that you're gonna divorce, i said of couse there's no need of you here, It's because of you i fear, that my heart's contorted and bleeding and that i'm needing a father.I try to speak, i know it's ubsurd,because i know that i can't be heard 'cause i'm so softspoken, yes i'm so softspoken
Verse 6
You say that in August you're leaving work for two weeks, Just sit down and THINK...You can't even leave work for two minutes Ohhh...yeah
Verse7
I wear a microphone in school....yes i know it's cool..i try to speak i know it's ubsurd because (here) i can be heard, but i don't like to in this situation, Because i'm so softspoken, yes i'm so softspoken
Verse 8
I cry myself to sleep, just to think that you haven't been here in and out for 17 years of my life it has given me strife and pain for you to think that i'm insane. ohhh...yeah
Verse 9
Next time you call, think twice, 'cause by then i won't play nice. I try to speak, i know that it's ubsurd, because i know that i can't be heard. ' cause i'm so softspoken, yes i'm so softspoken. Your heart and soul is frozen while mine is shatttered and broken And now guess what? i'm not so softspoken anymore...Yes, i'm not so softspoken..... anymore
more new songs
changed chords toan as yet untitled song also.. look at the bottom...the third one's down there somewhere
Every word i say
Just make it/these feelings go away
And then you turn away
Oh no, i would love to say i told you so but,
i 'd hate to see you go
So now i'll wait before it's too late
You were my father i knew
I also knew that this family's through
So i'm looking for a new day to say...
For now it's o.k. i'll add more when i can...i also made chords that really work this time:D: Am,F,C,G
and
Look into my mind. see what you wanna find.....I wish i could fly high into the sky...
gonna add more soon...just wait and see